Talk:Venture Capital Action Plan

Latest comment: 8 years ago by 216.198.139.38 in topic Written like a press release

Written like a press release

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Most of this article was written like a press release, about facilitating connections between investors and capital, and high-quality jobs. It can't be written that way, and it can't be written in a promotional tone whether or not there's an upcoming election. Roches (talk) 16:53, 16 May 2015 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for adding the sources and for taking care to select a balanced mixture including a financial paper and a newspaper of record. Roches (talk) 19:52, 16 May 2015 (UTC)Reply

Thanks. Please keep an eye on this article since I will be expanding in the coming days/weeks. Fundamentally the Plan is of Harper's government and since the election is around the corner it could smell with political flavor.Lake Ontario Wind (talk) 06:16, 17 May 2015 (UTC)Reply
All links have been dismantled due to the outgoing conservative government and incoming liberal government. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 216.198.139.38 (talk) 15:31, 7 April 2016 (UTC)Reply