Talk:Van Ness Bus Rapid Transit/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Truflip99 (talk · contribs) 18:12, 12 August 2022 (UTC)

Will start soon. --truflip99 (talk) 18:12, 12 August 2022 (UTC)

Lead

• Put "(BRT)" after the first instance of "bus rapid transit" and use "BRT" from there
  •  Done
• "Van Ness Avenue thoroughfare" is redundant
  •  Done
• comma after "Lombard Street"
  •  Done
• "Streetcar service on Van Ness Avenue began in 1915" --> Public transit on Van Ness Avenue began with streetcar service in 1915
  •  Done
• link ballot measure
  •  Done

Infobox

• Should you be using Infobox rail line tp?
  • {{Infobox bus line}} is designed for individual bus routes; {{Infobox rail line}} has a better parameter set for infrastructure like this project.

Design

• – 47 Van Ness and 49 Van Ness-Mission – use em dash
  • Per MOS:ENDASH, spaced en dashes are fine here.
• is bus 47 still suspended? not clear
  • Clarified at the bottom of the table
• FTA needs to be spelled out and linked at first instance
  •  Done
• Link trolleybus first instance
  •  Done
• Commission authorized a budget of US$815,000 -- omit "US"
  •  Done
• No mention of "BRT creep" in sources provided
  •  Done reworded
• In some cases, Muni have -- has?
  •  Done

more later. --truflip99 (talk) 18:49, 15 August 2022 (UTC)

History

• Link bond issue
  •  Done
• omit US from US$
  •  Done
• and for its row of dealerships -- perhaps clarify dealerships of what?
  •  Done

Source Source spot checks checked out.

Great work! --truflip99 (talk) 23:19, 18 August 2022 (UTC)

@Truflip99: Thanks! I believe I've addressed all your comments. Pi.1415926535 (talk) 00:49, 19 August 2022 (UTC)