Talk:Valentina Nappi

Latest comment: 9 years ago by Cavarrone in topic Article improvement

Article improvement edit

Sup everyone. Being a big fan of Valentina (that's right, I said it!) I spend a couple of hours significantly improving and expanding this article as best I can. Will another article contributor some copy edits and thoughts for improvements and then nominate it for GA-status. Cheers, Jonas Vinther • (speak to me!) 13:21, 12 April 2015 (UTC)Reply

  • A couple of preliminary thoughts:
A massive removal of sources is hardly an improvement. The more sources, the better.
There is maybe a bit too much weight on her being an atheist.
It would be helpful to find some additional (written) sources for what is currently just supported by a YouTube interview (see WP:NOYT). --Cavarrone 12:05, 13 April 2015 (UTC)Reply
All the sources I removed were dead links. You can go back in article history and check for yourself. Regarding YouTube, it can actually be used as a WP:RS. About the weight on her religious views, I suppose it's a possibility, but as the article only a stub when I began editing it, I thought the more info, the better. Jonas Vinther • (speak to me!) 14:14, 13 April 2015 (UTC)Reply
About the sources, I have not checked all of them one by one, maybe a couple are deadlinks, but the large majority of them are working and online, eg [1], [2], [3], [4], [5], [6], [7], [8], [9], [10]. As said above the more sources, the better, especially if you plan to make of this a good article, please restore them. Cavarrone 07:49, 14 April 2015 (UTC)Reply