Talk:UrbanToronto

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Natural RX in topic Advert
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Hi @Spasage:. I was hoping you could offer some points on the parts of the article you feel read like an advert. I have tried to take some care in ensuring the article was acceptable, as it was subject to an AfD discussion. Thanks. --Natural RX 17:09, 31 January 2018 (UTC)Reply

Text in lead and Features section require some rewrite. May be rename features heading with something else. It will be good, if some other people write this article as well. --Spasage (talk) 18:44, 31 January 2018 (UTC)Reply
I have removed a trivial section and tweaked some language, seems to be more of an stripped down start-class article now. If you see any further issues, please be bold, but I think it is neutral. --Natural RX 16:18, 2 March 2018 (UTC)Reply