Talk:Unum/Archives/2014
Latest comment: 9 years ago by GoGatorMeds in topic unnecessary negative language
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unnecessary negative language
in the "controversies" section, there were a number of words that were unnecessarily negative, such as "notorious," "massive," "very devastating," and others, that were used in contexts that seemed biased. I removed some of those words, without changing the meaning of the sentences. let me know if you have any questions about that edit. thank you.GoGatorMeds (talk) 20:17, 15 July 2014 (UTC)