Talk:Unified (concert)

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Review: May 8, 2024. (Reviewed version).

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Latest comment: 19 hours ago5 comments2 people in discussion

Passed. Arconning · (talk · contribs) 12:55, 8 May 2024 (UTC)Reply

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Nominator: Pseud 14 (talk · contribs) 15:08, 14 April 2024 (UTC)Reply

@Pseud 14 These are the things that have to be addressed! Arconning (talk) 10:05, 8 May 2024 (UTC)Reply

@Arconning: Thanks for taking this review. All actioned and responses provided. Let me know if clarifications are needed. Pseud 14 (talk) 12:48, 8 May 2024 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: Arconning (talk · contribs) 11:08, 6 May 2024 (UTC)Reply

I will be reviewing this article, comments will probably be finished in the next 72 hours! Good luck to the editors! Arconning (talk · contribs)

Prose and MoS edit

Lede edit

in partnership with Pinoy Box Office,, add the before Pinoy.
Ticket sales was handled by TicketNet, with Colgate as a major sponsor., change was to were.
- Both done

Background and development edit

leading up to the event, change to the lead up to the event.
- Done

Concert synopsis edit

before transitioning into a Adele and Whitney Houston tribute number., change a to an.
- Done

Reception and recording edit

No issues.

Set list edit

No issues based on grammar or MoS.

Refs edit

References are reliable, hopefully reference [17] could get replaced as it's a primary source, but if there are no other sources available will do a conditional pass.
- The source in question is the media itself since the quotations and the interviews referenced in the behind-the-scenes are directly taken from this source, per Cite AV media notes, and no other independent secondary sources were available (from what I've checked)
Please supply more sources for the Concert synopsis section.
- Similar to above, MOS:PLOT or WP:PLOTCITE applies here. Plot summaries generally do not include in-line citations. However, alternatively, concert synopsis can use the actual recording as a primary source. I have not seen additional sourcing that details a review of the full concert, so I think the use of the actual media sample use is sufficient. (See similar FA/GA articles, and similar discussion from GA reviews R2K: The Concert, Freedom, Songbird Sings Legrand Review)

Spotchecks edit

Earwig and manual spotcheck show up nothing. Pass.

Images edit

Image has proper license. Hopefully put pictures of Velasquez and Geronimo during that year in Background and development section.
- Unfortunately none that exists for that year. Also, images that are not related to the event are usually not recommended, unless they are images taken from the concert itself.

Misc. edit

Stable, no ongoing edit war, focused on the topic, broad in its coverage, fair bias.

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Criteria: 1a. prose ( ) 1b. MoS ( ) 2a. ref layout ( ) 2b. cites WP:RS ( ) 2c. no WP:OR ( ) 2d. no WP:CV ( )

3a. broadness ( ) 3b. focus ( ) 4. neutral ( ) 5. stable ( ) 6a. free or tagged images ( ) 6b. pics relevant ( )

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