Talk:Underneath (The X-Files)

Latest comment: 11 years ago by Gen. Quon in topic GA Review
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GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Lemonade51 (talk · contribs) 21:27, 10 July 2012 (UTC)Reply

No issues with sourcing or general prose, just minor quibbles:

  • In the lead, it states "The episode first aired in the United States and Canada on March 31, 2002 on the Fox network", but I'd imagine Fox is not available in Canada. Ideally the lead should only mention on what network the episode first aired (you can expand on other countries in the broadcast section) so something along the lines of "The episode first aired on the Fox network in the United States on March 31, 2002"
  • Therefore I would suggest removing the BBC One bit in the lead too.
  • "The episode received..." → "It received" to avoid repetitiveness
  • "He stands behind her as Fassl, then she opens the medicine cabinet." could be rephrased to "He stands behind her as Fassl; she then opens the medicine cabinet."
  • "Doggett is attacked and a ensues" I'm guessing this is a typo?

Otherwise happy to pass, on hold. Lemonade51 (talk) 21:46, 10 July 2012 (UTC)Reply

Thank you for your review. It seems I always have a stupid mistake in there. All issues have been fixed now.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 04:15, 11 July 2012 (UTC)Reply