Talk:Ukraine and the World Bank

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Peer Review edit

Lead Section: You first introduce the relationship between the World Bank and Ukraine, which makes it easy to follow. It would be helpful if you added some more information about the current economic situation of the Ukraine.

Clear structure: Your article is well structured. The overview of the plans provides a brief outline of the cooperation between the World Bank and Ukraine. However, Wikipedia offers the possibility to add paragraphs and to organize them by headings.

Balanced coverage: The length of your articles is very balanced and represents the importance of every topic. I appreciate that the paragraphs about the effects provides the most detailed information. You could pick a single project that is supported by the World Bank in Ukraine.

Neutral content: You just used the World Bank as a source. The World Bank statistics are a really reliable, but on the other hand, it would be appropriate to include more diverse sources in your article.

Reliable sources: The World Bank is a really reliable source, but you could add another source in order to diversify your coverage and come up with more perspectives.

Fstammwi (talk) 16:50, 8 December 2018 (UTC) fstammwi@ucsd.edu (Florian Stammwitz)Reply

I can not help to remark that parts of the article actually read literally not like a Wikipedia article but like a World Bank report. "the World Bank has begun multiple projects in Ukraine aimed at improving roads" does not sound very encyclopaedic to me.... — Yulia Romero • Talk to me! 20:55, 4 October 2021 (UTC)Reply