Talk:USS Tucker (DD-57)/GA1
Latest comment: 15 years ago by Bellhalla in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Below is my review:
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose): b (MoS):
- Lead: 'Tucker sailed off the east coast and in the Caribbean' - Not quite elegant
- Good point. I've changed so it says "sailed in the Atlantic and the Caribbean" — Bellhalla (talk) 17:39, 15 May 2009 (UTC)
- Design and construction: 'the great, great, granddaughter' - I am not sure if comma is the right way to go here. I think hyphens should be used.
- Yes, you're right. Changed. — Bellhalla (talk) 17:39, 15 May 2009 (UTC)
- Post-war: 'Departing from Brest for the last time on 16 December 1918, she headed for Boston, and a period of repairs in the navy yard.' - either incomplete or confusing.
- Reworded. — Bellhalla (talk) 17:39, 15 May 2009 (UTC)
- Lead: 'Tucker sailed off the east coast and in the Caribbean' - Not quite elegant
- a (prose): b (MoS):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- Tucker was acquired by the coast guard on 25 March (according to text) and on 26 March (according to infobox) - something is not right here.
- The correct date was 25 March; one of the sources listed the date as "25 Mar 26" which must have been what threw me off. :) — Bellhalla (talk) 17:39, 15 May 2009 (UTC)
- Tucker was acquired by the coast guard on 25 March (according to text) and on 26 March (according to infobox) - something is not right here.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars etc.:
- No edit wars etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
- Thanks - DSachan (talk) 14:06, 15 May 2009 (UTC)
- I think I've addressed all points. Thanks for the review. — Bellhalla (talk) 17:39, 15 May 2009 (UTC)