Talk:USS Rudyerd Bay/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 10:43, 5 May 2020 (UTC)

This article is in fine shape. Looks like you've ported my relevant comments from my reviews of her sisters over to here, but I have some additional comments:

• can you work the boilers into the body?
• generally you should try to keep footnotes in numerical order unless there is a reason (ie [3][2][4])
• Invasion of Iwo Jima→invasion of Iwo Jima
• link aerial torpedo, flagship, Luzon and tropical cyclone
• SheRudyerd Bay rendezvoused with the Third Fleet
• fix the 24-hour clock times
• 13:10., just after noon
• along with her sisters Kwajalein and Nehenta Bay
• "Halsey found it judicious to assign Rudyerd Bay and her sister Anzio"
• with the losts of most of its crew
• Later that day, aAt 08:40
• Invasion of Lingayen Gulf→invasion of Lingayen Gulf
• Rudyerd Bay reamined
• Invasion of Iwo Jima→invasion of Iwo Jima
• USS Saginaw Bay (CVE-82)
• Rear admiral→ Rear Admiral, there is another example of this
• was the TBM-1CP reconnaissance plane in the air or on the carrier when it was hit?
• where a squadron of Japanese kamikaze aircraft were operated→from which Japanese kamikaze aircraft were being launched
• link sortie
• this seems weird, the following para seems to be duplicated in full"On 8 October, Rudyerd Bay arrived at San Francisco, underwent repairs and alterations to enable her to carry troops, then joined the "Magic-Carpet" fleet. Into the new year, she brought veterans of the Pacific war back to the United States. On 23 January 1946, she completed her last trans-Pacific run; and on 18 February, she departed California for the east coast. Transiting the Panama Canal on 28 February, she off-loaded aircraft at Jacksonville, Florida, in early March, and proceeded to Boston to begin inactivation.[8]"
• Rudyerd Bay' received 5five battle stars
• ShipbuildingHistory.com and Hazegray.org are marginally acceptable at GA, but I wouldn't be relying on them at Milhist ACR or FAC
• THalsey's Typhoon looks like a typo

That's it. Placing on hold for the above to be addressed. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 06:44, 6 May 2020 (UTC)

• @Peacemaker67: I've addressed your points. Stikkyy t/c 03:24, 7 May 2020 (UTC)

• This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by acceptably licensed images with appropriate captions. Passing. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 06:49, 7 May 2020 (UTC)