Talk:USS Indiana (SSN-789)

Latest comment: 6 years ago by 192.158.48.90 in topic Could use some editing

Out of Date?

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Surprised to see that this article doesn't even mention the keel laying for this boat:

http://news.usni.org/2015/05/18/navy-holds-keel-laying-ceremony-for-attack-sub-indiana — Preceding unsigned comment added by 192.158.48.16 (talk) 12:10, 2 September 2015 (UTC)Reply

Could use some editing

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A tiny article to be sure, but better than a few weeks ago. However whoever wrote the first paragraph needs a lesson on how to write a paragraph - just about every sentence starts with she and follows the exact same structure - makes it sound like it was written by a sixth grader. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 192.158.48.90 (talk) 11:25, 22 October 2018 (UTC)Reply