Talk:USS Cape Esperance/GA1

Latest comment: 4 years ago by CPA-5 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: CPA-5 (talk · contribs) 15:02, 9 January 2020 (UTC)Reply


  • USS Cape Esperance (CVE-88) was a Casablanca-class escort carrier What does CVE, T-CVE-88 and T-CVU-55 mean?
  • Escort carrier, aircraft transport carrier, and utility aircraft transport carrier. I've tried my best to allude to this without strapping ugly parentheses into the text.
  • I see 3 howevers maybe remove one?
  • in order to replace heavy early war losses Same as her sisters' article we're speaking about WWII right?
  • which drove two shafts, providing 9,000 horsepower (6,700 kW) Link both shafts and kW.
  • hangar deck: one each fore and aft.[3][2][4] Re-order the refs here.
  • One 5-inch (127 mm)/38 caliber dual-purpose gun was mounted This is sea of blue is there a way to avoid this?
  • As noted in the other review, not really.
  • transport carrier throughout most of its time in service --> "transport carrier throughout most of her time in service"?
  • under a Maritime Commission contract, MC hull 1125, by Kaiser Shipbuilding Company MC is Maritime Commission right?
  • Yes.
  • which named escort carriers after bays or sounds in Alaska Pipe Alaska to the Territory of Alaska.
  • as part of a new naval policy which named subsequent Casablanca-class carriers --> " as part of a new naval policy which named subsequent Casablanca-class carriers"
  • to the Fast Carrier Task Force operating against Japanese positions Pipe Japanese to the Empire of Japan.
  • she rendezvoused with the Third Fleet about 300 mi (480 km) east of Luzon No nmi?
  • At 1:00 in the night, fueling operations --> "At 01:00 in the night, fueling operations"
  • approximately 160 mi (260 km) northwest, and comfortably safe No nmi?
  • due southwards, 180 mi (290 km) from where Same as above.
  • typhoon's center some 100 mi (160 km) away Same as above.
  • At 7:00, on the morning of 18 December, the fleet was inescapably --> "At 07:00, on the morning of 18 December, the fleet was inescapably"
  • At 9:52, Cape Esperance began maneuvering independently --> "At 09:52, Cape Esperance began maneuvering independently"
  • she steamed for Hong Kong, where she evacuated planes Pipe Hong Kong to British Hong Kong.
  • and proceeded to transport aircraft to Pakistan in 1956 Unlink Pakistan.

Images

  • Some of the images' sources are dead?

Infobox

  • Link nmi.
  • The men weren't included in the body?
  • (1944-1946) --> (1944–1946)
  • (1946-1950) --> (1946–1950)
  • (1950-1959) --> (1950–1959)

Sources

  • Y'Blood, William --> Y'Blood, William T.

That's anything from me. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 15:02, 9 January 2020 (UTC)Reply

@CPA-5: I've responded to your points. Stikkyy t/c 06:51, 10 January 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • @Stikkyy: Another question is where are Maksel and Stubblebine's sources? And the The Daily News's source should be included in the "Online sources" section. Also the circas need templates. I these issues are addressed, we can finally promote her. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 09:30, 10 January 2020 (UTC)Reply
@CPA-5:   Done Stikkyy t/c 07:14, 11 January 2020 (UTC)Reply