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Note to self edit
Divide by 145 when dealing with Japanese yen. YE Pacific Hurricane 04:11, 27 June 2017 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 05:52, 20 May 2018 (UTC)
Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 05:52, 20 May 2018 (UTC)
- Guam should be linked in the first mention.
- The track map differs from the prose. It did become extratropical over the Sea of Japan, but the map shows it tropical at that time.
- Use some pronouns to refer the storm other than "Zola".
- "7 people" Write out numbers less than ten.
- "Thirty-eight homes" This shouldn't be written out, to be consistent.
- ...or you can write out all the numbers in the sentence.
- "Sixteen ships" Same here.
- The Yen sign should be used.
- "Tropical Storm Winona, also assisted" Remove "also".
That should be it. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 04:23, 22 May 2018 (UTC)