Talk:Typhoon Yunya (1991)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Usernameunique (talk · contribs) 04:58, 28 April 2020 (UTC)

Infobox

• Probably worth adding the lahar-related deaths.

• • Sure. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 06:35, 28 April 2020 (UTC)

Lead

• Similar comment re Diding — Any information on its naming, and how about adding to body of article?
  • Yea this is the exact same situation as before. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 06:35, 28 April 2020 (UTC)
• a strong tropical cyclone that weakened before impacting the Philippines — Winds itself in a bit of a circle. Is it really first-sentence worthy?
  • I'll just simplify that down and remove the weakening bit. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 06:35, 28 April 2020 (UTC)

Meteorological history

• On June 11, 1991, — You read my mind on that one.
  • Kek. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 06:35, 28 April 2020 (UTC)
• Tropical Upper Tropospheric Trough — Why the caps?
  • Probably because the article was capitalized at some point and I never got out of the habit of lowercasing it. Fixed. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 06:35, 28 April 2020 (UTC)
• USNS Spica — This thing?
  • Linked. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 06:35, 28 April 2020 (UTC)
• Although already a tropical storm, the JTWC — First the JTWC struck Hainan, and now it's a tropical storm? Mind you, that might explain how it was able to strike Hainan...
  • Fixed. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 06:35, 28 April 2020 (UTC)

Impact

• destroyed bridges Santa Fe — in Santa Fe? Anything to link to for Santa Fe?
  • Fixed and added. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 06:35, 28 April 2020 (UTC)
• prompting concern from residents — Any more details?
  • No and kinda tempted to remove it altogether. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 06:35, 28 April 2020 (UTC)
• carried ash within 160 km (100 mi) away from Pinatubo, — within/away sounds contradictory.
  • Removed the latter. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 06:35, 28 April 2020 (UTC)
• As a result of the lahars, ... As a result of the lahars, — Repetition.
  • Changed the second. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 06:35, 28 April 2020 (UTC)
• Just to confirm, so two bus-terminal rooves collapsed?
  • Yes. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 06:35, 28 April 2020 (UTC)
• Excluding from laharsh — lahars?
  • Ugh, I was going too fast :P Fixed. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 06:35, 28 April 2020 (UTC)

Overall

• Yellow Evan, comments above. --Usernameunique (talk) 06:21, 28 April 2020 (UTC)
  • Thanks for the review. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 06:35, 28 April 2020 (UTC)
    • No problem, Yellow Evan. Passing now. --Usernameunique (talk) 04:30, 29 April 2020 (UTC)