Talk:Typhoon Mitag (2002)/GA1

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Reviewer: 12george1 (talk · contribs) 19:34, 20 September 2012 (UTC)

• "the first super tyhoon" - typo/misspelled word
  • Oops! --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 20:01, 20 September 2012 (UTC)
• "resulting in an islandwide power outage and" - Not sure if there is a mistake here, but I think it would read better as "resulting in islandwide power outages and"
  • Well, it was one power outage islandwide, it wasn't multiple outages. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 20:01, 20 September 2012 (UTC)
• "Japan Meteorological Agency (JMA)[nb 3];[1] the" - Shouldn't both the note and reference appear after the semicolon?
  • Yea, oops. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 20:01, 20 September 2012 (UTC)
• In the MH, why do you alternate between 1-minute and 10-minute sustained wind speeds? Is it because JWA uses 10-minute and JTWC uses 1-minute?
  • Yep, just mentioning speeds from both of them. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 20:01, 20 September 2012 (UTC)
• "in the FSM, producing a a wind gust of 76 km/h (47 mph) - Double word
  • Blargh. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 20:01, 20 September 2012 (UTC)
• "and portions of the town was flooded 1.5 m (5 ft)" - Shouldn't it be "and portions of the town were flooded 1.5 m (5 ft)"?
  • Yep. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 20:01, 20 September 2012 (UTC)
• Be sure to link the publishers and some of the authors of the references.
  • K, should be good! --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 20:01, 20 September 2012 (UTC)