Talk:Typhoon Mireille/GA1
Latest comment: 8 years ago by Hurricanehink mobile in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: 12george1 (talk · contribs) 20:15, 20 July 2015 (UTC)
Hello, Hurricanehink! I see that this article has been sitting here on the GAN list for almost 3 months now. So I'm going to be the person reviewing it.--12george1 (talk) 20:15, 20 July 2015 (UTC)
- "Typhoon Mireille ,known in the Philippines as Typhoon Oniang" - Move that comma
- "The typhoon first threatened Guam, although" - No love (wikilink) for Guam? :P
- "A South Korean freighter rode out the storm at the port in Hakata Bay.[11] It breached along the breakwater, causing it to sink,[12] killing all 10 crew members.[1] The Japan Coast Guard launched a search and rescue mission for two days.[11]" - Why is this part not with the stuff for Japan?
- Why is reference #1 titled "1992 Annual Tropical Cyclone Report" instead of "1991 Annual Tropical Cyclone Report"?
That's it--12george1 (talk) 20:15, 20 July 2015 (UTC)
- I believe I took care of all of this. I left the SK freighter bit where it is because there is so much Japan info, and so little elsewhere. Hurricanehink mobile (talk) 15:50, 21 July 2015 (UTC)