Talk:Tropical Storm Ivo (2019)/GA1

GA Review

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LightandDark2000 🌀 (talk) 21:10, 14 October 2021 (UTC)

This article is extremely well-written. However, I found a handful of minor issues. LightandDark2000 🌀 (talk) 21:10, 14 October 2021 (UTC)

Lead

• I would also specific that Ivo was the 9th named storm of the season.

• Done. Noah^Talk 14:12, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

• peaking the next day with winds of 70 mph (110 km/h) and a pressure of 990 mbar (29.23 inHg). It should be specified that these winds are maximum 1-minute sustained winds.

• Done. Noah^Talk 14:12, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

• Increasing wind shear caused the storm's intensification to level off later that day as the system turned towards the north-northwest. Add a comma after "later that day".

• Done. Noah^Talk 14:12, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

• Link "remnant low" to Post-tropical cyclone.

• Done. Noah^Talk 14:12, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

• Link Autonomous University of Sinaloa.

• Done. Noah^Talk 14:12, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

• Hundreds of homes and streets were inundated by floodwaters and mud as a result of torrential rainfall and multiple rivers overflowing. Add a comma after "and mud".

• Done. Noah^Talk 14:12, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

• during Hurricane Willa in 2018 Link "2018" to 2018 Pacific hurricane season.

• Done. Noah^Talk 14:12, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

• Link "Mexico State" to State of Mexico.

• Done. Noah^Talk 14:12, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

Meteorological history

• The second tropical wave tracked through the region during this time, sparking a further increase in convective activity. Did the second tropical wave merge into the first disturbance, or did it remain separate and only contribute to convective development? The article doesn't make that clear.

• The NHC doesn't mention it either way so it would be OR for me to make an assumption. Noah^Talk 14:12, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

• That's unfortunate. Well, I guess that there isn't anything that can be done about that, then. LightandDark2000 🌀 (talk) 19:59, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

• Shortly after peaking, Ivo's forward crawl slowed down to 12 mph (19 km/h) as the western edge of the ridge weakened. What speed was the storm moving at prior to the slowdown?

• Added a mention. Noah^Talk 14:26, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

• Ivo quickly turned towards the northwest and later north-northwestward early on August 23, Change "north-northwestward" to "the north-northwest". This is a grammar issue.

• Done Noah^Talk 14:26, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

• Continuous wind shear bombarbed Ivo, causing the mid-level circulation to separate and leaving only a small area of convection near the center. Maybe I didn't read this closely enough, but did the mid-level circulation separate from the convection, or the low-level circulation? Both are different, and each would have their own significance.

• It's specified the mid-level separated. Noah^Talk 14:26, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

• Cold 75 °F (24 °C) sea surface temperatures below and dry and stable air aloft caused all remaining convection to dissipate, Change "below" to "below the system", to make it more clear.

• I think it is clear enough already since the temps are specified as sea surface. Noah^Talk 14:26, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

• The low became stationary on August 26 and turned towards the southeast under the influence of a low-level steering flow, which was located west of the Baja California peninsula. Add a comma after "towards the southeast".

• Done. Noah^Talk 14:26, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

Preparations and impact

• Link "Guaymas" to Guaymas Municipality, "Empalme" to Empalme Municipality, Cajeme, "Navojoa" to Navojoa Municipality, "Huatabampo" to Huatabampo Municipality, "Etchojoa" to Etchojoa Municipality, "Álamos" to Álamos Municipality, "Benito Juárez" to Benito Juárez Municipality, Sonora, "San Ignacio Río Muerto" to San Ignacio Río Muerto Municipality, "Bácum" to Bácum Municipality, "Quiriego" to Quiriego Municipality, and "Rosario" to Rosario de Tesopaco Municipality.

• Done. Noah^Talk 15:22, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

• Link Cabo San Lucas and San José del Cabo.

• Done. Noah^Talk 15:22, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

• Link Nayarit, Jalisco, Colima, Michoacán, Guerrero, Oaxaca, and Chiapas. Also add a comma after "Oaxaca".

• Done. Noah^Talk 15:22, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

• Link Zacatecas.

• Done Noah^Talk 15:22, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

• Link Ciudad Insurgentes.

• Done Noah^Talk 15:22, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

• Link "Comondú" to Comondú Municipality.

• done Noah^Talk 15:22, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

• Link "Los Cabos" to Los Cabos Municipality.

• Done. Noah^Talk 15:35, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

• Link "Mazatlán" to Mazatlán Municipality, Elota, "Mocorito" to Mocorito Municipality, and "Guasave" to Guasave Municipality.

• Done. Noah^Talk 15:35, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

• in the Elota Change to "in the Elota Municipality", as the current wording sounds awkward.

• Done. Noah^Talk 15:35, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

• Link Baluarte River.

• Done. Noah^Talk 15:35, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

• the left bank of the Baluarte River Is this the west bank of the river? It would be nice if this could be clarified.

• Would have no way of knowing since that varies with perspective. I changed it to one bank since we don't know. Noah^Talk 15:35, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

• Link Ahome.

• Done. Noah^Talk 15:35, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

• Link Los Mochis.

• Done. Noah^Talk 15:35, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

• Streets were closed to traffic in the city to prevent waves I assume that these waves as from the Pacific Ocean, or did they have another source?

• I assumed they meant vehicles passing through would create waves. Noah^Talk 15:35, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

• Link "Angostura Municipality" to Angostura Municipality, Sinaloa.

• Done. Noah^Talk 15:35, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

• the towns of Chinitos and Melchor Ocampo were left isolated after water from an irrigation channel significantly damaged the Ford bridge. Add a comma after "were left isolated".

• Done. Noah^Talk 15:35, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

• Link Acaponeta.

• Done. Noah^Talk 15:35, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

• Six businesses and 25 homes were inundated and 11 cars were stranded. Add a comma after "25 homes were inundated".

• Done. Noah^Talk 15:35, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

• Link "Naucalpan Municipality" to Naucalpan.

• Done. Noah^Talk 15:35, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

• Link Iztapalapa.

• Done. Noah^Talk 15:35, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

Aftermath

• Link "Loreto" to Loreto Municipality, Baja California Sur.

• Done. Noah^Talk 15:35, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

• Link Topolobampo.

• Done Noah^Talk 15:35, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

• worked to drain their fields to prepare for the next agricultural season after the storm inundated the fields with up to 170 mm (6.7 in) of water. Add a comma after "agricultural season".

• Done. Noah^Talk 15:35, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

• Link "chlorination" to water chlorination.

• done. Noah^Talk 15:35, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

• Link Autonomous University of Baja California Sur.

• Done. Noah^Talk 15:35, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

• Link Ciudad Constitución.

• Done. Noah^Talk 15:35, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

• Link Choix.

• Done. Noah^Talk 15:35, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

These are all of the issues that I found. The writing is pretty solid. LightandDark2000 🌀 (talk) 21:10, 14 October 2021 (UTC)

Source review

• I didn't find any issues with any of the citations. However, if you plan on taking this to FA, I would recommend adding the translated titles to each of the foreign language sources.

Copyvio check

• I ran the article through Earwig's Copyvio Detection Tool. The article had a 15.3% match at most, but I didn't see anything resembling a copyright violation. LightandDark2000 🌀 (talk) 19:59, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

Final

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

   I am going to ✓ Pass this article. Congratulations on another GA! LightandDark2000 🌀 (talk) 19:59, 15 October 2021 (UTC)