Talk:Tropical Storm Dalila (2007)/GA1

Latest comment: 11 years ago by 12george1 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 06:23, 29 June 2013 (UTC) I will review more fully tomorrow, but for starters, here has more information. YE Pacific Hurricane 06:23, 29 June 2013 (UTC)Reply

  • Please use TWO's in the MH.
  • "began entering a region of colder sea surface temperatures, causing weakening and disorganization of the cloud pattern.[5] " to "began entering a region of colder sea surface temperatures, resulting in weakening as the cloud pattern became less organized.[5] " YE Pacific Hurricane 15:29, 29 June 2013 (UTC)Reply
  • "Although Dalila passed over Socorro Island with winds of 60 mph (95 km/h), there were no reports of deaths or damage.[1] " to "Although Dalila passed over Socorro Island with winds of 60 mph (95 km/h), there were no reports any deaths or damage.[1] "
  • Link to newspapers in refs if applicable. 15:29, 29 June 2013 (UTC)