Talk:Trinidad and Tobago at the 1998 Winter Olympics

Latest comment: 5 years ago by MWright96 in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

This review is transcluded from Talk:Trinidad and Tobago at the 1998 Winter Olympics/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 10:33, 16 August 2018 (UTC)Reply

Will review. MWright96 (talk) 10:33, 16 August 2018 (UTC)Reply

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Background edit

  • "The Trinidad and Tobago Olympic Committee was recognized by" - recognised

Bobsleigh edit

  • "On the first day, they posted runs of 56.74 seconds and 56.78 seconds." - a comma is needed inbetween the two times
  • "On the second day, the Trinidad and Tobago sled" - I think the word team would be better than sled
  • "posted times of 56.73 seconds and 56.40 seconds." - same issue as the second point
  • "out of 36 sleds that finished the competition." - How about contest for variety

Reference edit

  • Consider archiving Reference 2 like what you've done with the rest of the citations

Good work on this article. Nothing major came out during my read-through. MWright96 (talk) 12:29, 16 August 2018 (UTC)Reply

  • Everything taken care of; the tool I used to do the first pass of archiving has changed and no longer wants to archive working links, I don't know why... Courcelles (talk) 12:51, 16 August 2018 (UTC)Reply