Talk:Trimaran Capital Partners/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sandman888 (talk) ^{Latest PR} 17:44, 18 August 2010 (UTC)  On hold If you start with these points and nudge me when you're done, I'll go through the rest of the history section.

References

• Need publisher, date, author and accessdate where possible. Consider using the template:cite web
• Provide reference for every section. Generally, never end a sentence without a reference.
  • There are still references missing. Add references at the end of every section (save for lead), or it'll fail on that. Sandman888 (talk) 21:56, 27 August 2010 (UTC)

Lead

• I'm afraid it isn't very sexy and I don't know if there's anything to do about it.

• I have failed your nomination due to reference issues. As I said, you must provide a reference for every section. By doing a courtesy check of the first couple of referenced facts I found the following:
• [5] does not back up the prose at all, no mention of Argosy.
• [6] makes no mention of Argosy.
• [7] makes no mention of Argosy
• [8] has accessdate but no URL.

• • Which makes everything written in this article very susceptible. You are of course welcome to bring it up to review if you believe that this is unfair. Sandman888 (talk) 21:27, 29 August 2010 (UTC)