Talk:Triathlon at the 2012 Summer Olympics – Men's

Latest comment: 7 years ago by MWright96 in topic GA Review

Transition times edit

How come there are no transition times on the results section? 86.180.106.99 (talk) 12:28, 4 August 2016 (UTC)Reply

Explained in key. - Yellow Dingo (talk) 11:12, 7 August 2016 (UTC)Reply

Language edit

Should it not be tagged for UK English? (medalist => medallist, for example). Nedrutland (talk) 08:44, 8 August 2016 (UTC)Reply

@Nedrutland: Feel free to tag and convert. I'm Australian so I'm not sure what needs to be changed. - Yellow Dingo (talk) 09:04, 8 August 2016 (UTC)Reply

GA Review edit

This review is transcluded from Talk:Triathlon at the 2012 Summer Olympics – Men's/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 07:03, 19 August 2016 (UTC)Reply

Will review. MWright96 (talk) 07:03, 19 August 2016 (UTC)Reply

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Qualification edit

  • Could you clarify what an NOC is?
  • "If an athlete had already qualified through another method the NOC didn't receive another quota with it instead going to the next NOC on the ITU Olympic Qualification List." - did not
  • Delink the continents per WP:OVERLINK
  • Spell out the ITU on the first instance and leave the acroymn in brackets
  • The Great Britain wikilink should be to Great Britain at the 2012 Summer Olympics and not to the island

Course edit

  • Add adj=on to the convert template for 1.5 kilometres (0.93 mi), 43 kilometres (27 mi), 6.137 kilometres (3.813 mi) and 2.5 kilometres (1.6 mi)
  • "one big lap." - unencyclopedic
  • "The course then quickly left Hyde Park to go past Buckingham Palace on Constitution Hill." - The course then quickly turned left towards Hyde Park to go past Buckingham Palace on Constitution Hill

References edit

That is all I found. On hold. MWright96 (talk) 08:29, 19 August 2016 (UTC)Reply

@MWright96: Thanks for your review, I have implemented all of your points. - Yellow Dingo (talk) 08:56, 19 August 2016 (UTC)Reply
Good work. Promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 11:37, 19 August 2016 (UTC)Reply