Talk:Treat Me

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Theleekycauldron in topic Did you know nomination

Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk05:05, 8 September 2022 (UTC)Reply

Created by VersaceSpace (talk). Self-nominated at 17:03, 5 August 2022 (UTC).Reply

I've struck the original hook owing to factuality concerns. In the meantime here's some alternate hooks:
ALT1 ... that Chloe Bailey wrote her song "Treat Me" while exiting a relationship?
ALT2 ... that to promote her song "Treat Me", Chloe Bailey released a teaser video depicting her wearing a bodysuit with crystals?
Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 10:35, 15 August 2022 (UTC)Reply
Courtesy ping VersaceSpace Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 02:08, 18 August 2022 (UTC)Reply
Narutolovehinata5, I'm fine with either of these, although I have concerns about them being interesting. It may be ideal to search for a more reliable source that describes the animal present in the music video. —VersaceSpace 🌃 21:41, 20 August 2022 (UTC)Reply
To be honest, I don't think either of my suggestions are spectacular either, but there's really no other option I can still see in the article. In any case, given the concerns about the cheetah/leopard thing above, it may be a good idea to simply omit that part from the article for now unless a better source can be found. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 23:24, 20 August 2022 (UTC)Reply
If that source is used, maybe we can use this hook instead?
ALT0a ... that Chloe Bailey dances next to a leopard in the music video for her song "Treat Me"?
Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 03:12, 23 August 2022 (UTC)Reply
@Narutolovehinata5, @LordPeterII: the source and hook both look good to me. Thanks for your help. —VersaceSpace 🌃 03:22, 23 August 2022 (UTC)Reply
Article now corrected with the proposed source. I'm sure there are better sources, but a primary seems appropriate here. —VersaceSpace 🌃 03:30, 23 August 2022 (UTC)Reply
  I would support ALT0a with the correct cat. I see the Harper's Bazaar source calls it a tiger, so it seems cat confusion is a bit more commonplace than I'd thought. Sammi Brie (she/her • tc) 01:11, 26 August 2022 (UTC)Reply
@Sammi Brie: Wait whaat? o.O How on earth can someone mix up a leopard and a tiger?! Cheetah is at least roughly the same size, but a frickin tiger... just wow. We might really need Cat confusion at some point XD --LordPeterII (talk) 08:45, 26 August 2022 (UTC)Reply