Talk:Transhuman Space

Latest comment: 8 years ago by Arfisk in topic Supplemental Material

Untitled

edit

What? Besides making no grammatical sense, the sentence "And in outer space all sort of modern crime thrives, barely suppressed by military forces." doesn't make much logical sense, either: how can something thrive when it's being suppressed? Maybe something like, "And in outer space, various military forces vainly attempt to suppress all sorts of modern crime." The rest of this article is similarly poorly-written.

I'm not saying it is, but it reads like a SJG press release/back cover blurb that has been hastily paraphrased to avoid copyvio. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 92.18.81.246 (talk) 21:40, 28 June 2009 (UTC)Reply

Supplemental Material

edit