Talk:Toraja/to do

Latest comment: 17 years ago by Indon
  1. Add language,dance,music,food,etc., if any.
  2. Add economical situation of Torajan
  3. Toraja is the ethnic group, Torajan is the people, aluk is the original Torajan religion with the official name is Aluk To Dolo. (Don't use Aluk Torajan!!)
  4. Improve prose in LS.
  5. Orphan paragraphs (1-2 lines in it) -> merge/expand/remove.
  6. Add picture(s) of Toraja people
  7. Recheck the Cruyt material re hisotiric movement of Torajas and consider deleting this section unless you can find some scholarly validation--this is very dubious material. See Nooy-Palm's work for a more reliable representation of early migrations etc.
  8. Consider replacing the Sandra materials. This "article" was a class term paper based on a reinterpretation of original scholarly works. It is not based on anthropological insights, as the author states she has never been to Toraja. As a result there are some errors in her representations.
    → done. — Indon (reply) — 16:58, 18 December 2006 (UTC)Reply