Talk:Tony Hawk's Pro Skater 5/GA1

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 19:54, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• "the first traditional entry " what does that mean in this context?
  •  Done it means it is the first main entry, e.g. not a spin-off. changed it to main entry--DasallmächtigeJ (talk) 21:54, 8 March 2021 (UTC)
• "8GB patch" I would link this, indeed I would link both elements of it, the size and the "patch".
  •  Done--DasallmächtigeJ (talk) 21:54, 8 March 2021 (UTC)
• "a great deal" -> "considerably"
•  Done--DasallmächtigeJ (talk) 21:54, 8 March 2021 (UTC)
• " cause no points to be awarded"" -> "attain no points"
  •  Done--DasallmächtigeJ (talk) 21:54, 8 March 2021 (UTC)
• "previous entries" do you mean "previous games in the series"?
  •  Done--DasallmächtigeJ (talk) 21:54, 8 March 2021 (UTC)
• What is "branching"?
  •  Done--DasallmächtigeJ (talk) 21:54, 8 March 2021 (UTC)
• "10 levels, albeit only seven"' ten/seven or 10/7. I'd go former.
  •  Done--DasallmächtigeJ (talk) 21:54, 8 March 2021 (UTC)
• Link power-up.
  •  Done--DasallmächtigeJ (talk) 21:54, 8 March 2021 (UTC)
• "Characters in bold are new to the series" fails ACCESS as some people will find it hard to see that, use a symbol instead/as well as.
  •  Done--DasallmächtigeJ (talk) 21:54, 8 March 2021 (UTC)
• Letícia has a diacritic missing.
  •  Done--DasallmächtigeJ (talk) 21:54, 8 March 2021 (UTC)
• Notes referenced?
  • the informations are referenced in the text above, but if you want to I can make references.--DasallmächtigeJ (talk) 21:54, 8 March 2021 (UTC)
• "Pro Skater 4 ." spare space.
  •  Done--DasallmächtigeJ (talk) 21:54, 8 March 2021 (UTC)
• """Robomodo had consulted with some former Neversoft " both overlinked.
  •  Done--DasallmächtigeJ (talk) 21:54, 8 March 2021 (UTC)
• "accessible. Essentially, " I would put a colon here rather than a full stop.
  •  Done--DasallmächtigeJ (talk) 21:54, 8 March 2021 (UTC)
• "was panned heavily by critics upon release" overlinked.
  •  Done--DasallmächtigeJ (talk) 21:54, 8 March 2021 (UTC)
• " being panned by critics upon release" followed by "was panned heavily by critics upon release" repetitive, plus the first of the two is unreferenced.
  •  Done--DasallmächtigeJ (talk) 21:54, 8 March 2021 (UTC)
• You don't mention release dates/platforms in the prose, is that normal? You don't link Xbox One or PS4 in the reception section...
  •  Done--DasallmächtigeJ (talk) 21:54, 8 March 2021 (UTC)
• " of NPCs were" explain this before using an abbreviation.
  •  Done--DasallmächtigeJ (talk) 21:54, 8 March 2021 (UTC)
• "newly adjusted" hyphenated.
  •  Done--DasallmächtigeJ (talk) 22:05, 8 March 2021 (UTC)
• GameSpot is overlinked but first time it's not in italics, second time it is in italics...
  •  Done--DasallmächtigeJ (talk) 22:05, 8 March 2021 (UTC)
• "framerate" or "frame rate"?
  •  Done--DasallmächtigeJ (talk) 22:05, 8 March 2021 (UTC)
• "objective was completed." ref?
  •  Done--DasallmächtigeJ (talk) 22:05, 8 March 2021 (UTC)
• "obvious at every turn"." ref?
  •  Done--DasallmächtigeJ (talk) 22:05, 8 March 2021 (UTC)
• Ref 44 title has a spare n, no?
  •  Done--DasallmächtigeJ (talk) 22:34, 8 March 2021 (UTC)
• Ref 19 v ref 25 Gamespot formatting...
  •  Done--DasallmächtigeJ (talk) 22:34, 8 March 2021 (UTC)
• Ref 22 publisher/website?
  •  Done--DasallmächtigeJ (talk) 22:34, 8 March 2021 (UTC)
• Same for refs 36 to 39.
  •  Done I'm not sure whether they are reliable or not, I didn't put them in the article. However, both could easily be replaced--DasallmächtigeJ (talk) 22:34, 8 March 2021 (UTC).
• Some websites/publishers not referenced, why?
  •  Done--DasallmächtigeJ (talk) 22:34, 8 March 2021 (UTC)
• "Video games developed in Romania" not mentioned in the article.
  •  Not done Fun Labs is a Romanian developer, they are in the infobox.
    • In that case, Fun Labs should really be mentioned in the prose, along with their Romanian roots, as that's not at all obvious to the readers. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 09:54, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
      •  Done--DasallmächtigeJ (talk) 16:45, 9 March 2021 (UTC)

That's all for now, on hold. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 16:39, 8 March 2021 (UTC)

I should have adressed all of your concern as of now.--DasallmächtigeJ (talk) 22:34, 8 March 2021 (UTC)

DasallmächtigeJ just one comment re:Fun Labs. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 09:54, 9 March 2021 (UTC)

The Rambling Man  Done--DasallmächtigeJ (talk) 16:48, 9 March 2021 (UTC)

DasallmächtigeJ: ref 2, bare URL which appears to be dead (https://www.funlabs.com/project/projects.html) The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 17:01, 9 March 2021 (UTC)

The Rambling Man Fixed it.--DasallmächtigeJ (talk) 17:41, 9 March 2021 (UTC)

Ok, I'm satisfied this meets the GA criteria, good work. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 18:38, 9 March 2021 (UTC)