Talk:Tomorrowland (book)

Latest comment: 5 years ago by SMcCandlish in topic Needs copyediting

Needs copyediting

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For example, "Library Journal reviewer Talea Anderson also noted the introduction of each essay and discussed technology focusing on ..." doesn't actually appear to mean anything concrete in English, it's just a string of buzzwordy rambling. I would just replace it, but is unclear what it's even trying to convey.  — SMcCandlish ¢ 😼  01:01, 4 December 2018 (UTC)Reply