Talk:Tomorrow I Go/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Kyle Peake (talk · contribs) 18:11, 7 May 2020 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Will do initial comments now, but more to come shortly. --Kyle Peake (talk) 18:11, 7 May 2020 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Infobox looks good, apart from the absence of a single chronology
• "is a song performed by Albanian" → "is a song by Albanian"
• Target CD to Compact disc
• "song which incorporates" → "track that incorporates"
• "in its instrumentation" → "in the instrumentation"
• "It lyrically discusses" → "Lyrically, the song discusses"
• Remove wikilink on love as it's too obvious
• "marriage also reflecting a story" → "marriage, while also reflecting the story"
• "The song represented Albania in" → ""Tomorrow I Go" represented Albania for"
• "pre-selection competition Festivali i Këngës with" → "pre-selection competition, Festivali i Këngës, with"
• "with the" → "with the song's"
• "version "Nesër shkoj"
• "the sixteenth place in a field of twenty four scoring a total of fifty three points" → "the 16th place in a field of 24, scoring a total of 35 points"
• "her Albanian-themed performance" → "her Albanian-themed performance of the song"

 Done

Background and composition

• Start this section off with mentioning who wrote and composed the original song
• "In 2004, Ledina Çelo was" → "In 2004, Çelo was"
• "As part from the competition's rules" → "For complying with the competition's rules"
• "The singer took part" → "Çelo took part"
• "song "Nesër shkoj" composed by Adrian Hila and written by Pandi Laço" → "song "Nesër shkoj", composed by Hila and written by Laço"
• "Musically, the song is" → "Musically, the latter is"
• "song incorporating traditional" → "song that incorporates traditional"
• Target Albanian Instruments to Music of Albania instead
• "Lyrically, it discusses" → "Lyrically, the track discusses"
• Remove wikilink on love
• Add wikilink on wedding like in the lead

 Done

Promotion and release

• Retitle to Release and promotion
• Swap the order of release info around with promotion info
• Wikilink Eurovision Song Contest to itself
• Any more info on the video?
• "on 29 April 2005 as" → "on 29 April 2005, as"
• "A standalone download was made available on" → "The song was made available for digital download on"
• 14 February 2018 through" → "14 February 2018 by" to avoid repetitive wording
• Mention the other label as well as RTSH

 Done

At Eurovision

Festivali i Këngës

• Remove wikilink on Festivali i Këngës
• "to determine country's" → "to determine the country's"
• Remove wikilink on Eurovision Song Contest 2005
• "It consisted of two semi-finals" → "The former consisted of two semi-finals"
• "on 16 and 17 December, and the grand final on 18 December 2004" → "on 16 and 17 December 2004, and the grand final on 18 December of that year"
• "in which, Ledina Çelo was chosen" → "which included Çelo being chosen"
• "represent the country" → "represent Albania"

 Done

Kyiv

• Remove the target on 50th edition as that's already been wikilinked to
• Do the same for Eurovision Song Contest and Kyiv wikilinks
• "on 19 May and the grand final on 21 May 2005" → "on 19 May 2005 and the grand final three days later"
• "to the then-Eurovision rules" → "to the Eurovision rules at the time"
• "except the host country" → "apart from the host country"
• "Spain and the United Kingdom" → "Spain, and the United Kingdom"
• "final, although, the top ten" → "final. However, the top ten"
• "the top 10 result in the previous year" → "the top ten result of the previous year"
• "In the grand final, the country" → "In the grand final, Albania"
• "sixteenth place in a field of twenty four with 53 points" → "16th place in a field of 24, with 53 points"
• Mention the performance was of the song
• "dressed with traditional" → "dressed in traditional"

 Done

Track listing

• Good

Release history

• Are you sure the CD should be included in this table since it is part of a compilation?
• Like I said, only centre the ref; take "Hear My Plea" for example

 Done

References

• Make sure all are archived using the tool
• Copyvio score is very clean
• Target Mopo to Hamburger Morgenpost on ref 4, but keep the former citing as a publisher solely
• On ref 8, remove "On Amazon..." from the ref titles and change the respective publishers to Amazon.it and Amazon.es, keeping the wikilinks though

Final comments and verdict

• Will get round to the other sections being reviewed soon, hence my listing of them above. --Kyle Peake (talk) 18:11, 7 May 2020 (UTC)
•  On hold as this is quite a short article but needs a few fixes before GA status. --Kyle Peake (talk) 20:01, 7 May 2020 (UTC)

@Kyle Peake: I did the changes you've requested.--Lorik17 (talk) 21:57, 7 May 2020 (UTC)

✓ Pass as things have been sorted; however, I have noticed during multiple reviews that you seem to not understand my comments about the references quite often. --Kyle Peake (talk) 06:25, 8 May 2020 (UTC)