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editAwesome article so far! I think your introduction paragraph is very strong, and gives the reader an idea of who Tom Weinberg is and what he has done. If possible, maybe try to have more of a variety of sources in your Early Life section and TVTV. I also think a comprehensive list of the films he has worked on would be beneficial, and if possible providing links for the public to find some of his work online. 66.238.132.42 (talk) 19:14, 19 October 2015 (UTC)
Opening Paragraph
editGreat opening paragraph, but it's almost too long. I wonder if you could break it down into more than one paragraph, or streamline it and use some of this info to flesh out the categories below.AmyDeer (talk) 11:48, 21 October 2015 (UTC)
Thank you so much for the feedback, AmyDeer! I have now broken down the intro and filtered that information into the subcategories. Vcbrowne (talk) 05:03, 28 October 2015 (UTC)
Sections
editGreat subsections. Additional possibilities might include Tom Weinberg's work on Image Union and The 90's. AmyDeer (talk) 11:51, 21 October 2015 (UTC)
I have now added the two subcategories of Image Union and The 90s, which also includes information that was previously stated in the intro. Thank you very much for the input! Vcbrowne (talk) 05:05, 28 October 2015 (UTC)