Talk:Toa Payoh MRT station/GA1

Latest comment: 3 years ago by The Rambling Man in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 19:45, 7 March 2021 (UTC)Reply


Comments

  • Link Toa Payoh in the lead.
  • " a set of colourful tiles " coloured perhaps (colourful sounds like a tourist brochure).
  • "Exit D of Toa Payoh MRT station." no full stop required, it's a fragment.
  • "to relief the" relieve.
  • "Thomson-Sembawang" -> "Thomson–Sembawang"
  • "Novena stations and" is there a link for Novena?
  • "S$96.8 million (US$45.81.." as per the other review, reduce $ conversion to 1 decimal place for this and others.
  • Could link topping out.
  • "As an effort for people to get familiar.." -> "In an effort to familiarise people with..."
  • " sneak preview" no need "sneak", not encyclopedic.
  • ""987. About 44,000 people" merge with "during which time"
  • "During the opening, Toa Payoh ..." station is mentioned three times in this one sentence... repetitive.
  • "has been replaced" ->"was replaced".
  • "The name, Toa Payoh, means..." -> "Toa Payoh means..."
  • "Interchange, HDB Hub,[34] " HDB Hub can be linked here (and in the lead)
  • "the Braddell and " link?
  • "Concourse level of the station." no full stop required, it's a fragment.
  • " Giving a sense of movement, the rainbow colours represent various races" delete, the next sentence covers it more encyclopedically.
  • Ref 26 has a spaced hyphen, should be en-dash.
  • Ref 24, work should be in italics.
  • It says "Opened 7 November 1987" in infobox but then it says "The station opened for passenger service on 7 November 1989" is this a typo?

That's all, nice and neat. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 21:09, 7 March 2021 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for the review so far. Addressed the points above.--ZKang123 (talk) 01:02, 8 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
No worries, looks good to me, so I'm promoting. Good work. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 09:40, 8 March 2021 (UTC)Reply