Talk:Tkrkt/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 06:38, 26 July 2022 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

After your previous one passed, it is time for me to get on with this! --K. Peake 06:38, 26 July 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Remove afro pop and dancehall from the infobox since they are only sourced as influences
• The all caps stylization is not sourced anywhere in the body
• The release sentence should be the one after writing/production
• "Lyrically, it is an" → "Lyrically, the song is an"
• Fourth para should be four sentences, so have the first sentence begin with "Upon release,"
• "with praise directed on its" → "Praise was directed from them towards its"
• Remove overly obvious wikilink on Dubai
• Add a new sentence mentioning the critical reception of the video

Background and release

• "was written by Era Istrefi" → "was written by Istrefi"
• The creation of "Nuk E Di" involvement is not sourced
• Start a new para at the various territories release
• Why is the release listed as several remixes including those ones when only they are sourced?

Reception

• Merge this with the below section and retitle to Reception and promotion per overly short size
• "and Istrefi's appearance." → "and Istrefi's vocals."
• "commended its production" → "commended the song's production"
• Remove or replace Wolf in a Suit per WP:SELFPUB

Music video

• Make this the second para of the newly proposed above section
• "An accompanying music video for "Tkrkt was" → "An music video for "Tkrkt" was"
• Remove overly obvious wikilink on Dubai
• "indoor location decorated with" → "indoor location that is decorated with" to flow better with the as well as part
• The source does not appear to mention her performing to the song when on the sofa
• WP:OVERCITE of [4] for three sentences; out of this group, only invoke after the last one
• "of spotting and flashing lights." → "of spotlights and flashing lights."
• "While Music Arena Gh designated" → "A Music Arena Gh editor designated"
• Remove or replace Wolf in a Suit per WP:SELFPUB

Charts

• Good

Release history

• Good

References

• Copyvio score looks fab at 18%!!!!
• Ref 1's Germany citation is missing the language parameter, also use the original title that shows when opening the link
• What exactly makes ref 5 a reliable source?
• Ref 7's citations should use the original titles that show when the links are opened
• Remove or replace ref 8 per WP:SELFPUB
• WP:OVERLINK of Telegrafi on ref 10

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold until all of the issues are fixed after this quick review! --K. Peake 08:06, 26 July 2022 (UTC)

Hi Kyle Peake hope you're well. Sorry for the delay I'm currently on vacation with a limited access to internet though. I will continue in the next 2 days. Cheers! Iaof2017 (talk) 15:41, 1 August 2022 (UTC)

Iaof2017 Eight days later and any updates on this? --K. Peake 06:49, 9 August 2022 (UTC)

Iaof2017 You need to re-order background and composition so release comes before the comp, also how is ref 5 reliable? --K. Peake 15:21, 12 August 2022 (UTC)

Hello Kyle Peake, sorry again for the delayed response, I'm currently on vacation and on total holiday-mode :P. Ehm, I removed ref 5 and created a new section (tracking list), are you fine with that? Iaof2017 (talk) 17:32, 14 August 2022 (UTC)

• ✓ Pass now, your ways of working around the issues are definitely acceptable! --K. Peake 20:25, 14 August 2022 (UTC)