Talk:TimeClock Plus

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Suggestions for improvement edit

Latest comment: 12 years ago2 comments1 person in discussion

Some quick thoughts on how the article can be improved.

It needs a proper lead section (important, but probably should be written last)
It has too many graphics (including the features table) that break up the flow of the text
All those quotes should be converted to narrative text
The sections should be more logical: perhaps History, Features, Reception
- History could contain the content in the present History and Versions
- Features could include the present Applications and much of Reception
- Reception could include details of where it's used and any independent reviews etc (if they can be found)

—SMALL JIM 16:11, 18 November 2011 (UTC)Reply

Update: I've done the above. —SMALL JIM 16:50, 25 November 2011 (UTC)Reply