Talk:Tiffany Cole

Latest comment: 1 month ago by Afddiary in topic Tone of the article...
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Is there some reference that Michael Jackson, the singer, whose articled is linked in this article is the actual Michael Jackson refered to in the article? I doubt this is true but I'm so new I am hesitant to just remove the link. RhysGryg (talk) 20:40, 15 March 2011 (UTC)Reply

ofcourse its not michael jackson.. but it might be so that it is linked to the singer. just change the name of the article linked like Michael Jackson (criminal).--BabbaQ (talk) 20:41, 15 March 2011 (UTC)Reply
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Tone of the article...

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This page is written like an amateur novel. As I read through it, I'm half expecting the next paragraph to start with "a cool mist rolled in over the bay on the morning of the murders." It's not at all appropriate language for an encyclopaedia. Can someone with some sense please make an edit? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 85.194.4.30 (talk) 18:30, 11 February 2018 (UTC)Reply

I really can not see your point. In fact it is written like any other Wikipedia article. If you have suggestions then bring the up here. --BabbaQ (talk) 18:34, 11 February 2018 (UTC)Reply

“Tiffany Cole was a familiar face to Carol and Reggie Sumner, her family having been neighbors of the 61-year-old couple in South Carolina.” —this is the tone of a long read piece on buzzfeed about this woman. “On the night of “” Tiffany Cole and “” drove to “”. The victims were Cole’s neighbors, and according to prosecutors...” That’s how you style a Wikipedia article. You’ve written all of this in your own voice rather than in Wikipedia’s voice. The article is littered with these strange style choices. For clarity and objectivity it should be changed in many sections. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 94.234.32.240 (talk) 07:08, 14 February 2018 (UTC)Reply

I know it has been 6 years and this is an IP address I'm replying to, but I felt it necessary to state that I agree with this. Reading through the article, I wasn't a fan of the sensationalistic/journalistic tone of several sentences. I didn't edit any of them (except one extremely awkwardly worded part) because I figured, given they've been untouched for years, they're fine – but I don't think they actually are. I'll see what I can do about rewording it to look more encyclopedic. (I already went through to add missing links and mark a few parts that needed citations.) Afddiary (talk) 18:21, 25 September 2024 (UTC)Reply