Talk:Tiberius III/GA1
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Reviewer: CPA-5 (talk · contribs) 19:34, 14 September 2019 (UTC)
Claim my seat here. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 19:34, 14 September 2019 (UTC)
- Tiberius III (Greek: Τιβέριος Γʹ, Tiberios III; Latin: Tiberius Augustus) Unlink both Greek and Latin because of common terms. Also do we know when he was born and when he died?
- The links are actually from the language templates themselves, and cannot be removed; and no, we don't have his death and birth dates down to a point where it would be useful to put a (life-death) date part into the lede. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 20:05, 16 September 2019 (UTC)
- the primary rival of the Byzantine Empire Link Byzantine Empire.
- Done
- revolting against the Umayyad Caliph Yazid I Decapitalise "Caliph".
- Done
- Iberia is overlinked
- Done
- where he campaigned successfully before leading troops in Azerbaijan and Caucasian Albania.[10][1] Maybe add "the Region of" before Azerbaijan. It could confuse the readers the same with Iberia. Also re-order the refs in numerical order.
- Done
- I believe one "however" is enough for this short article.
- Done
- Exarchate of Africa is overlinked.
- Done
- Same as above with Carthage.
- Done
- had been captured near the Propontis to return to their homelands,[3][20][16] Re-order the refs.
- Done
- gained the support of the Khazar Khagan Busir Sea of blue.
- Not really a way to avoid that, all of them are worth linking to. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 20:05, 16 September 2019 (UTC)
- humiliated, before being taken away and beheaded.[1][21][3] Re-order the refs here.
- Done
- No edit wars.
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Sources
- Some ISBNs have hyphens others don't maybe standardise the ISBNs.
- Done}
- Bacharach's title doesn't match with the ISBN?
- Done
- Google Books claims that the book of Donner is from 2012. Which one is correct?
- Google Books uses the date of the book uploaded to it; WorldCat gives all the dates, the book is actually from 2010, but a 2012 book (reprint probably) was the one uploaded to Google Books. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 20:05, 16 September 2019 (UTC)
- Prosopographie der mittelbyzantinischen Zeit Online. Berlin-Brandenburgische Akademie der Wissenschaften. Nach Vorarbeiten F. Winkelmanns erstellt source has a title error.
- Done
- Google Books claims that Norwich's first book was published in 1988 and the second book is from 1997. Which one is correct?
- Same situation here. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 20:05, 16 September 2019 (UTC)
- No location for Saxby and Angelov's book?
- Done
- Is there no ISBN for Wellhausen's book?
- No OR.
Images
- Looks good to me.
That's anything from me. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 15:18, 15 September 2019 (UTC)
- @CPA-5: Believe I have done all you've asked. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 20:05, 16 September 2019 (UTC)
- I think, we can pass this one, if I didn't forgot something. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 11:50, 18 September 2019 (UTC)