Talk:Three Girls Revitalizing Asia

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• ... that the fascist Empire of Japan created a girl group as propaganda?

• Source: https://muse.jhu.edu/pub/23/article/910021

• ALT1: ... that some of Japanese idol culture can be traced back to a girl group used to create fascist propaganda? Source: https://muse.jhu.edu/pub/23/article/910021
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• Comment: Discovered this recently, the article is a bit short but fully cited

Created by Microplastic Consumer (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

Microplastic Consumer (talk) 23:58, 28 July 2024 (UTC).

• I'll gladly take this nomination as I am interested in idol culture. lullabying (talk) 05:35, 29 July 2024 (UTC)
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Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith Interesting:

QPQ: None required.

Overall: Article was nominated within 7 days of creation. Unfortunately, it currently sits at 1,354 characters in prose and seems to be a stub, with all information crammed into the lead, so therefore it is too short to qualify for DYK. Earwig picked up an unlikely copyright violation of 1%. Nominator has less than 5 nominations so a QPQ is not required at this time. Should this pass, for a different variation of ALT1, I suggest, ALT2: "... that Three Girls Revitalizing Asia is credited with assigning a girl group member a representative role seen in modern Japanese idol culture?" lullabying (talk) 05:47, 29 July 2024 (UTC)

@Lullabying: I just checked the article with DYKcheck and it comes in at 1630 characters.--Launchballer 19:10, 29 July 2024 (UTC)

Thank you! I will change this to maybe. The article still seems like a stub. Is it possible it can be formatted so it can properly have a lead and a body? lullabying (talk) 20:31, 29 July 2024 (UTC)

Ask @Microplastic Consumer:.--Launchballer 21:40, 29 July 2024 (UTC)

It 100% can, I just don't have the time to do that at the moment, so please bare with me. Microplastic Consumer (talk) 22:10, 29 July 2024 (UTC)

• Sure thing. Ping me once you are done. lullabying (talk) 01:30, 30 July 2024 (UTC)

@lullabying It's done! Microplastic Consumer (talk) 03:33, 31 July 2024 (UTC)

• • Looks good! Just to make it more consistent with a lot of idol group articles, I think it would be nice if "Koa sannin musume" was renamed "Career" and the members list was moved below it. Also, Saiko Okuyama's name needs to be in Western order per MOS:JAPAN as she was born after the Meiji Restoration. lullabying (talk) 01:33, 1 August 2024 (UTC)

I've taken your suggestions and it should look better, after deciding what blurb to use it should be ready. Microplastic Consumer (talk) 02:20, 1 August 2024 (UTC)

• Good to go! lullabying (talk) 21:03, 1 August 2024 (UTC)