Talk:Thomas Hardy (Royal Navy officer, died 1732)/GA1
Latest comment: 1 year ago by Pickersgill-Cunliffe in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 23:01, 16 June 2022 (UTC)
I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 23:01, 16 June 2022 (UTC)
- Images appropriately licensed
- French 20-gun letter of marque This reads oddly. Surely you mean a privateer?
- Corrected
- some of which would continue all the way to Lisbon with Hardy only staying until the convoy was safely out of the Channel This is confusing. Do you mean that Hardy only had responsibility in the Channel and that he was not going to Lisbon with the convoy?
- Reworded, hopefully is clearer
- Spot checks made, no issues.
- Nicely done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 11:24, 29 June 2022 (UTC)
- @Sturmvogel 66: Hi, thanks for reviewing this. I've replied above. Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 12:12, 29 June 2022 (UTC)