Talk:Third Eye Shoppe/GA1

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GA Review

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Reviewer: Aoba47 (talk · contribs) 17:32, 12 December 2017 (UTC)

• Grabbing this for a review. Aoba47 (talk) 17:32, 12 December 2017 (UTC)
  • Thank you! ---Another Believer _(Talk) 19:42, 12 December 2017 (UTC)

Lead and infobox

• I would add ALT text for the logo and the image in the infobox.
  • Done. ---Another Believer _(Talk) 19:42, 12 December 2017 (UTC)

Description

• For this sentence (Cannabis activist Russ Belville compared the establishment to a "Prohibition-era speakeasy”.), do you think it would be helpful to add links for Prohibition and speakeasy?
  • Done. ---Another Believer _(Talk) 19:42, 12 December 2017 (UTC)

History

• Please add ALT text for the images.
  • Done. ---Another Believer _(Talk) 19:42, 12 December 2017 (UTC)
• For this sentence (He anticipates the building's demolition, and told The Oregonian he leaves the business $60,000 in debt.), I think that “anticipates” should be “anticipated” and “leaves” should be “left”. I would also add “that” in front of of “he left”.
  • Done. ---Another Believer _(Talk) 19:42, 12 December 2017 (UTC)

Reception

• Everything looks good here.
  • Thanks! ---Another Believer _(Talk) 19:42, 12 December 2017 (UTC)

Final comments

• Good work on this. Once my comments are addressed, I will pass this. Have a wonderful day or night. Aoba47 (talk) 18:25, 12 December 2017 (UTC)
  • Thank you, again! ---Another Believer _(Talk) 19:42, 12 December 2017 (UTC)

Verdict

• ✓ Passing this now. Aoba47 (talk) 21:04, 12 December 2017 (UTC)

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