Talk:Thinking 'Bout You (Dua Lipa song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 18:41, 10 April 2021 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

I will start this review tomorrow; hopefully it does not get in the way of your schedule with the other review, as I can see that one has not been completed... --K. Peake 18:41, 10 April 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Infobox looks good!
• "wrote the song with Adam Argyle while" → "co-wrote the song with Adam Argyle, while" because a comma is needed before while in British English for instances like this
• I would recommend a comma either before through or as in the release sentence since it reads like a bit of a run-on currently
• Pipe promotional single to Promotional recording
• Pipe ballad to Sentimental ballad
• Wikilink acoustic guitar
• "using weed, alcohol" → "confessing to using weed, alcohol"
• "Commercially, the song charted" → "Commercially, "Thinking 'Bout You" charted"
• Include the respective positions on the charts
• Mention that the song received the video in February 2017
• "A remix by" → "A remix of the song by" to specify so it doesn't sound like you mean a live remix

 Done

Background and composition

• Audio sample text looks good, but you should wikilink acoustic guitar nevertheless!
• There is no background info about how any of the collaborators became involved with Lipa; I would suggest mentioning that Koz contributed produced numerous tracks on the album
• "and Adam Argyle with" → "and Adam Argyle, with" for correct separation of the roles to avoid confusion
• Wikilink synthesizer
• Pipe mixing to Audio mixing (recorded music)
• Pipe mastering to Mastering (audio)
• "was handled by" → "were both handled by"
• ""Thinking 'Bout You" is an" → "Musically, "Thinking 'Bout You" is an"
• Pipe ballad to Sentimental ballad
• Swap the order of the Idolator and iTunes Store refs per the prose
• "is composed in ⁴
  ₄ time" → "is composed in the time signature of ⁴
  ₄ time"
• Pipe groove to Groove (music)
• Wikilink acoustic guitar
• Wikilink bluesy
• Pipe range to Vocal range
• Wikilink lament
• "evoking desperation in" → "while evoking desperation in"

 Done

Release and promotion

• Add the word "accounts" after SoundCloud and YouTube
• [15] does not source the song as being among the ones performed by her at Eurosonic Noorderslag
  • Removed. LOVI33 22:48, 11 April 2021 (UTC)
• "she performed it on" → "she performed the song on"
• Remove comma after independent record label
• "It serves as the" → "It served as the"
• Pipe promotional single to Promotional recording
• "Room for 2" being the previous promo single is unsourced
  • Added in source. LOVI33 22:48, 11 April 2021 (UTC)
• You can split the music video into a third para of its own to separate from release/performances, as there is enough info
• "in April of that year alongside" → "in April 2017 alongside one of"
• "the setlists for the singer's Self-Titled Tour in 2017 and 2018." → "the setlist for the singer's Self-Titled Tour, which ran from 2017 to 2018."
• Remove wikilink on New Zealand and mention that the performance was for Warner Music New Zealand

 Done

Reception

• "Lipa's versatility saying" → "Lipa's versatility, saying"
• "that it shows her" → "that the song shows Lipa's"
• Wikilink Tanqueray
• "thought it is more of a" → "thought the song is of a more"
• "but also it's clearest giving one" → "but also among its clearest due to giving one"
• "opted that the song" → "opined that the song" because this is not a specific choice

 Done

Track listings

• Good

Credits and personnel

• Wikilink Dua Lipa

 Done

Charts

• Good

Release history

• Good

References

• Copyvio score looks great at 19.4%!!!
• Top job with the archiving; shame I can't replicate that for any of my articles right now due to the tool being down
• Cite 3VOOR12 as publisher instead for ref 15
• Remove WBUR-FM from ref 20
• Pipe Warner Music New Zealand to Warner Music Australasia on ref 30

 Done

External links

• Good

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 10:09, 11 April 2021 (UTC)
  • Thanks for the review Kyle Peake! I have addressed all your comments. Let me know if anything else needs to be done. LOVI33 22:53, 11 April 2021 (UTC)

• LOVI33 ✓ Pass now, great to wake up to your response here in the UK and everything is checked! --K. Peake 06:36, 12 April 2021 (UTC)