Talk:Theodore I Laskaris/GA1
Latest comment: 4 years ago by Borsoka in topic GA Review
GA Review edit
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 18:55, 6 April 2020 (UTC)
Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 18:55, 6 April 2020 (UTC)
Criteria edit
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- No DAB links
- No dead links
- No missing citations
Discussion edit
Prose Suggestions edit
Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.
Lede edit
- Theodore was imprisoned, but he escaped suggest Theodore was imprisoned by the Crusaders, but he escaped
- Theodore's position consolidated after Tzar Kaloyan of Bulgaria inflicted a crushing defeat on the Latins in the Battle of Adrianople (in Thrace) in 1205. suggest However, Theodore's position strengthened after Tzar Kaloyan of Bulgaria inflicted a crushing defeat on the Latins in the Battle of Adrianople (in Thrace) in 1205.
Early life edit
Parentage edit
- Bearing the surname Tzamantouros instead of Komnenos, Manuel and Michael must have been born to a different mother suggest Manuel and Michael must have been born to a different mother, as they bore the surname Tzamantouros instead of Komnenos.
- most probably through the marriage of one of his aunts suggest either probably through the marriage of one of his aunts or most likely through the marriage of one of his aunts
Early career edit
- Emperor Alexios III who had not fathered sons... suggest Emperor Alexios III who had no sons...
Fall of Constantinople edit
- To seize the imperial throne, would suggest To seize the Byzantine throne, because there's a lot of European empires at play in this article.
- @Borsoka: That is all my suggestions, passing now. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 18:18, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
- Also, if you have the time, and the desire, would you consider reviewing my FAC nomination, Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Marcian/archive2? Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 18:19, 7 April 2020 (UTC)