Talk:The X-Files Mythology, Volume 4 – Super Soldiers/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 22:32, 6 August 2012 (UTC)

Plot summary

• Link FBI

  Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 15:47, 13 August 2012 (UTC)

Production

• Link Fox

  Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 15:47, 13 August 2012 (UTC)

• "seventh season" of the show?

  I'm not sure what you want here. If you are suggesting I add "of the show" after 'seventh season', this is redundant, as the sentence already reads "...quit full-time participation in the show after the seventh season."--Gen. Quon (Talk) 15:47, 13 August 2012 (UTC)

Reception

• Seems a bit too small. Any way of expanding?

  There's really not much else out there in terms of reviews. This is the unloved DVD collection.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 15:47, 13 August 2012 (UTC)

Episodes

• # should no be used per MOS: guidelines. Use "No. in series" and "No. in season"

  Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 15:47, 13 August 2012 (UTC)

• # should not be used twice

  Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 15:47, 13 August 2012 (UTC)

• U.S. viewers should be added.

  This is a DVD release of specific episodes, not a season, so the viewership wouldn't be appropriate.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 15:47, 13 August 2012 (UTC)

Special features

• Don't have country flags per MOS:FLAG

  Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 15:47, 13 August 2012 (UTC)

• Change the country to regions 1, 2, 3, 4, etc.

  Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 15:47, 13 August 2012 (UTC)

• Set Details should be Set details, per MOS:CAPS

  Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 15:47, 13 August 2012 (UTC)

• Special Features should be Special features, per MOS:CAPS

  Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 15:47, 13 August 2012 (UTC)

• - should be an en-dash per WP:DASH. It is for two in "Special features" at the special features area.

  Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 15:47, 13 August 2012 (UTC)

• Release Dates should be Release dates, per MOS:CAPS

  Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 15:47, 13 August 2012 (UTC)

References

• Add sub-sections for "Footnotes" and "Bibliography", per MOS:ACCESS

  Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 15:47, 13 August 2012 (UTC)

• Ref. 33: IGN is missing publisher (News Corporation)

  Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 15:47, 13 August 2012 (UTC)

• In some references, Fox Home Entertainment should be 20th Century Fox Home Entertainment

  Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 15:47, 13 August 2012 (UTC)

• Ref. 40 is missing publisher (Time Inc)

  Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 15:47, 13 August 2012 (UTC)

• Ref. 41 is missing publisher (The New York Times Company)

  Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 15:47, 13 August 2012 (UTC)

• Ref. 42 is missing publisher (The Onion)

  Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 15:47, 13 August 2012 (UTC)

External links

• - should be an en-dash per WP:DASH. It is before "4"

  Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 15:47, 13 August 2012 (UTC)

That's all. Great work on the page; on hold for now. TBrandley 05:33, 13 August 2012 (UTC)

I believe I've addressed everything.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 15:47, 13 August 2012 (UTC)

Great! I have tweaked the article, and will pass the nomination. Excellent work. TBrandley 16:00, 13 August 2012 (UTC)