Talk:The Witcher (Dark Horse Comics)

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Cwmhiraeth in topic Did you know nomination

Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk06:20, 17 August 2021 (UTC)Reply

Created by Piotrus (talk). Self-nominated at 08:20, 4 August 2021 (UTC).Reply


General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  
QPQ: Done.

Overall:   Article is new enough, long enough, well-sourced, neutral and plagiarism-free. Hook is cited in article. However, I don't think it will appear very interesting to somebody who is not familiar with The Witcher. I don't think using a hook from the reviews would seem over-promotional-y. Also, the article seems a bit, if you don't mind me saying, messy. The reception section takes most of the prose (is there really nothing else that can be said about these comics?) and seems to be missing some punctuation. "The Witcher" is also mentioned several times, sometimes as "the Witcher" and sometimes "The Witcher". However, most of these instances are not in italics. I might recommend a request at WP:GOCER. QPQ has been done. Pamzeis (talk) I am not watching this page so please ping me if you want my attention. 02:19, 8 August 2021 (UTC)Reply

Pamzeis, Regarding a more interesting hook, I am open to suggestions. The ALT1 I can think of is below. Regarding the incompleteness, a) it is not required for DYKs and b) no, I really didn't find anything else in the reliable sources. Ditto for formatting issues such as The Witcher, I'll see about fixing what I see but again, this is generally not a DYK-level requirement (it's a GA-level, IMHO). --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 02:25, 8 August 2021 (UTC)Reply

ALT1: ...that the The Witcher comic book series has received generally positive reviews?
I still don't find ALT1 interesting. How about...
If you're OK with this hook, then, I'll gladly give it a tick. Pamzeis (talk) 02:33, 9 August 2021 (UTC)Reply
Pamzeis, The hook is correct, and you are right, it is more interesting than my original one (and less promotional than my ALT). I am happy to "adopt" it so you can "tick" it. Cheers, --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 04:19, 9 August 2021 (UTC)Reply
  AGFing on the foreign language source. Pamzeis (talk) 05:14, 9 August 2021 (UTC)Reply
Pamzeis, For the record, Google Translate should give a quite solid Polish to English if you ever feel the need to check this kind of stuff. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:12, 9 August 2021 (UTC)Reply