Talk:The Way I Loved You (Taylor Swift song)/GA1
Latest comment: 1 day ago by Kyle Peake in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Nominator: Gained (talk · contribs) 04:36, 12 May 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 08:58, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a. (reference section):
- b. (citations to reliable sources):
- c. (OR):
- d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a. (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a. (major aspects):
- b. (focused):
- a. (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
- b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/fail:
- Pass/fail:
(Criteria marked are unassessed)
I will review this fully today! --K. Peake 08:58, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
edit- Infobox looks good both times!
- "She wrote the track with John Rich and produced it" → "She wrote the song with John Rich and served as a producer"
- ""The Way I Loved You" is about" → "it is about"
- Remove pipe on country since contemporary country is linked in the same sentence, making this come across as a WP:OVERLINK
- "snare drum and loud and subtle" → "snare drum, and loud and subtle"
- Make the reception sentence the first one of the second para instead
- Add a comma after Hot 100 and mention that the certification was in the United States
- "the United States," → "the US," per MOS:US on mentions after the first instances
- "received certifications from" should be a new sentence saying "The song received platinum and silver certifications in Australia and the United Kingdom from the..." and then mention the two certification organizations, respectively
- "The re-recorded track received mostly positive comments" → "The re-recording received mostly positive reviews"
Background and writing
edit- "contain autobiographical themes," → "contains autobiographical themes,"
- "said that Rich "was able to relate to it because" → "said that Rich managed to be relatable "because" to avoid overquoting and re-invoke the ref at the end of each of these sentences that use direct quotes
- "she is with her audience." → "she was with her audience."
- "her and Nathan Chapman and" → "her and Nathan Champman, and"
Releases
edit- Img looks good!
- Remove link on Fearless and mention the position of the track on the album
- Mention that the certification was in the United States
- Remove overly obvious link on Lisbon since this is a capital city
- Second para looks good!
- "with peaks of 94[21] and 24,[22]" → "with peaks at numbers 94[21] and 24,[22]"
- Mention the two countries those certifications were in
Music and lyrics
edit- ""The Way I Loved You" is a" → "Musically, "The Way I Loved You" is a"
- "oriented country[4] and rock" → "oriented country, rock" and I would suggest moving all of these refs to the end of the sentence as the order generally lines up with info here
- Invoke the ref for the Slant Magazine sentence
- "believed that the song was" → "believed that the song is"
- Wikilink as tempo instead
- [32][33][34] is numerically ordered, so please move them all to the end of the sentence
- Audio sample looks good!
- "Emily Lee from iHeartRadio claimed that" → "Emily Lee from iHeartRadio felt that"
- Is 1990s grudge a typo from the source? If so, end the speech marks at take" and then write out 1990s grunge
Critical reception
edit- "and wrote that the production was" → "and that the production was"
- "evoked her previous "Avril Lavigne-esque sneer [...] hits" but" → "evoked Swift's previous "Avril Lavigne-esque sneer [...] hits", but"
- "delightfully dramatic" [...] which," → "delightfully dramatic – which,"
- "was devoid of "radio-ready hooks and megawatt" → "is devoid of radio-friendly hooks and "megawatt"
- "gave it "new life"." → "give it "new life"."
- Remove link on Vulture
Personnel
edit- Why is Nathan Chapman not listed as a producer?
- Maybe align the first credits to the left and the second to the right?
Charts
edit- Good
Certifications
edit- Shouldn't this section follow the previous one's blueprint of having the separate tables and captions rather than sub-sections especially since the first version only had one certification?
Note
edit- Good
References
edit- Copyvio score looks safe at 23.1%!!!!
- Ref 1 should cite the original URL (https://www.songwriteruniverse.com/taylorswift123.htm) with the archived link rather than the homepage of the website and the current duplicate of the same URL and fix MOS:QWQ issues
- Replace ref 7 and 18's people parameter with the others parameter
- Cite MTV as publisher instead on ref 11
- I am confused by ref 14; the original URL is CNN but the archive is CTV News, which one are you meaning to cite?
Sources
edit- Good
Final comments and verdict
edit- On hold until all of the issues are fixed; this article is mostly smooth though! --K. Peake 11:45, 28 August 2024 (UTC)