Talk:The United States and the French Revolutionary and Napoleonic Wars

Latest comment: 7 months ago by LuxembourgLover in topic the whole thing

the whole thing edit

I believe this whole article needs to be rewritten. The tone is off, and it is marred with technical errors. I'll be starting small and fixing the most obvious problems here, but I'd like to really fix this up over time. I'm still getting the hang of tone, so if you find a mistake of mine, I will appreciate a concise explanation along with your revision. Ggidla (talk) 17:40, 25 August 2023 (UTC)Reply

I am the original writer, I have been trying to fix the errors and organize. This is one of the bigger articles I have written so I could uses help. LuxembourgLover (talk) 21:49, 9 October 2023 (UTC)Reply
I have been working on it and I have fixed many of the problems. I would continue to work on it if any one noticed any more problems. Also this is the main reason for merge so I do not know why we are having the discussion here? LuxembourgLover (talk) 23:29, 15 October 2023 (UTC)Reply