Talk:The Uninvited (1944 film)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 00:44, 25 April 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 00:44, 25 April 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Can the caption be "Theatrical release poster"?

Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2021 (UTC)

• Add alt text to the image (WP:ALT).

Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2021 (UTC)

• Washington, DC → Washington, D.C. (consistency)

Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2021 (UTC)

• Remove the comma after Lewis Allen.

Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2021 (UTC)

• Add a comma after Ruth Hussey.

Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2021 (UTC)

• Add a comma after Harrison's Reports.

Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2021 (UTC)

• Add a comma after Charlie Parker.

Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2021 (UTC)

Plot and cast

• Plot is under 700 words - passes WP:FILMPLOT.

Right on. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2021 (UTC)

• "grand-daughter" → "granddaughter"

Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2021 (UTC)

• Dr Scott → Dr. Scott (consistency)

Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2021 (UTC)

• Add a serial comma after "Rick, Pam" (both uses).

Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2021 (UTC)

• "The group realize" → "The group realizes"

Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2021 (UTC)

• Cast section looks good.

Right on. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2021 (UTC)

Production

• Here and in other sections, combine citations from the same source.

Done. I continued having citations where there was a quote though. Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:54, 27 April 2021 (UTC)

• Add a serial comma after "A Matter of Life and Death (1946)".

Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:54, 27 April 2021 (UTC)

• "in September 29, 1942" → "on September 29, 1942"

Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:54, 27 April 2021 (UTC)

• "October 20th" → "October 20" (MOS:BADDATE)

Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:54, 27 April 2021 (UTC)

• Add a comma after "a copy of The Uninvited".

Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:54, 27 April 2021 (UTC)

• Add a serial comma after "Allen, Partos".

Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:54, 27 April 2021 (UTC)

• Add a comma after "in fact".

Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:54, 27 April 2021 (UTC)

Release

• "for the The" → "for The" (both uses to avoid repetition).

Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:57, 27 April 2021 (UTC)

• Other than that, this section looks good.

Sweet! Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:57, 27 April 2021 (UTC)

• Combine citations from the same source.

Did this for some here. There's a few that I don't feel should be combined as they combine information from separate sources. But I've believe I've done what you asked. Andrzejbanas (talk) 11:18, 28 April 2021 (UTC)

Reception

• Lower the usage of quotes with WP:RECEPTION.

Legacy

• Try shortening the caption as it feels too long.

Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 17:02, 27 April 2021 (UTC)

• Also add alt text (WP:ALT).

Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 17:02, 27 April 2021 (UTC)

References

• Archive sources.

Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 14:09, 27 April 2021 (UTC)

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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