Talk:The Thing You Love Most/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk · contribs) 13:05, 3 January 2014 (UTC)

Just grabbing this one for a review later today. Miyagawa (talk) 13:05, 3 January 2014 (UTC)

• No duplicate links
• References are all solid, although I'd suggest you find an archived version of the TV By The Numbers link at some point (not needed as part of this review) just as I know from using it for the Enterprise articles that they don't last more than a couple of years before they re-use the urls.

• Good idea, done. Ruby 2010/2013 22:21, 4 January 2014 (UTC)

• Lead: Not really neccessary, but if you wanted to get a wikilink into the first season article in the top of the lead then you could change it to "second episode of the first season of the..." and link "first season" to Once Upon a Time (season 1).

•  Done Ruby 2010/2013 22:21, 4 January 2014 (UTC)

• In the character's past: Maleficent is the direct link, rather than Maleficent (Disney).

•  Done Ruby 2010/2013 22:21, 4 January 2014 (UTC)

• Production: A little more information on Beeman wouldn't go amiss. I thought by calling him a Smallville vet that he was simply a director, so I was surprised to find that he was actually an executive producer on the show (at least according to his Wiki article, I didn't go any further than that).

• I've changed "veteran" to "co-executive producer" (another user likes to add in that type of information, and never care enough to remove it.) :) Ruby 2010/2013 22:21, 4 January 2014 (UTC)

• Ratings: best to specify (and link) to Nielsen ratings instead of just saying ratings.

•  Done Ruby 2010/2013 22:21, 4 January 2014 (UTC)

• Reviews: Not sure the A- needs to be in quotes, although if it is then it should be directly cited.

•  Done (removed) Ruby 2010/2013 22:21, 4 January 2014 (UTC)

I think that's probably it. On a funny note, I just finished sorting out the article for the episode of Enterprise that Kristin Bauer van Straten appears in only a few days ago. Miyagawa (talk) 11:20, 4 January 2014 (UTC)

Thanks for reviewing! That's funny. That actress seems to be entertaining in everything she's in. Ruby 2010/2013 22:21, 4 January 2014 (UTC)

Ok cool, I think this is good for GA now. Miyagawa (talk) 01:34, 5 January 2014 (UTC)