Talk:The Thing About Pam/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Onegreatjoke (talk · contribs) 15:09, 13 December 2022 (UTC)

Hello, I plan on doing this review. Comments will come sometime in the afternoon. Onegreatjoke (talk) 15:09, 13 December 2022 (UTC)

Alright! I am done with the review. Putting this on hold so that you can finish it. Onegreatjoke (talk) 21:02, 15 December 2022 (UTC)

@Onegreatjoke:  Done A person in Georgia (talk) 00:46, 16 December 2022 (UTC)

@A person in Georgia: I still have problems about the broadness. Specifically the premise being too short for me. If you can fix that than I can pass this. Onegreatjoke (talk) 18:50, 16 December 2022 (UTC)

@Onegreatjoke:  Done A person in Georgia (talk) 15:08, 19 December 2022 (UTC)

Satisfied now. Approving nomination. Onegreatjoke (talk) 17:28, 19 December 2022 (UTC)

Prose

Development

• "about the involvement of Pam Hupp in the murder of Betsy Faria as well as the sentencing and release of her husband Russ Faria" should be "of her husband, Russ Faria".
• "Since 2014, Dateline had devoted several episodes to the story" should be has.

Casting

• "It was also reported NBCUniversal Chairman of Entertainment Content Susan Rosner Rovner" should be "It was also reported that NBCUniversal Chairman of Entertainment Content"

Filming

• "After adding the prosthetics, makeup took between two and a half and four and a half hours to apply." should be "After adding the prosthetics, the makeup took between"
• "When asked why they did not cast an actress with a closer resemblance of Hupp's physical appearance" replace with to.

That's it for prose!

Referenced

• Programming Insider doesn't explicitly mention whether these are american viewers.
  • Not much I can do about this since that's what the template says; Nielsen only reports US numbers (nielsen rating). A person in Georgia (talk) 00:46, 16 December 2022 (UTC)
• Viewers for episode 2 isn't correct.
  • In the source, we're using the "updated live+same day" info at the very bottom. A person in Georgia (talk) 00:46, 16 December 2022 (UTC)
• Citation 16 doesn't exactly say it was on the final stagesof pre-production. Nor does it say that casting was underway in New Orleans.
  • Recited source 17. A person in Georgia (talk) 00:46, 16 December 2022 (UTC)
• "After adding the prosthetics, makeup took between two and a half and four and a half hours to apply." The source doesn't verify this.
  • Added source. A person in Georgia (talk) 00:46, 16 December 2022 (UTC)

That's it!

Copyvio

Earwig detected no Copyvios so this section is a pass.

Broad

Personally, I feel as if the premise of the story is lacking. The premise is extremely small and should probably be expanded so that it's more than two sentences.

Neutral

Article seems to be neutral so this section is a pass.

Stable

Article is stable so this section is a pass.

Media

All media looks good so this section is a pass.

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