Talk:The Ten-Per-Cent Solution
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Plot summary needs rewrite
editI have added the {{grammar}} tag to the article as the current version of the plot summary reads very poorly: lots of sentence fragments, extremely informal tone, and so on. I have yet to see this episode, so anyone who has and can make it more coherent is encouraged to do so. To call this a C-class article given the current state of this section is extremely generous. --Kinu t/c 20:19, 6 December 2011 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 06:11, 17 December 2011 (UTC)
I'll review this article sometime tomorrow. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 06:11, 17 December 2011 (UTC)
Here are the issues I found:
- "However, Annie soon begins to interfere too much and this frustrates" I'd tweak to 'much, which frustrates'
- Reception would probably be a better section title than Release, since that's more what it's about.
- Changed to "Release and reception". Theleftorium (talk) 00:13, 18 December 2011 (UTC)
- "finishing before new episodes of" finishing ahead of sounds better in this context.
I'll put the article on hold and will pass when the issues are fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 00:04, 18 December 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review! :) Theleftorium (talk) 00:13, 18 December 2011 (UTC)
- No problem. Looks good now, so the article passes. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 03:56, 18 December 2011 (UTC)
The title is a reference to the book "The Seven-Per-Cent Solution".