Talk:The Tale of Mr. Jeremy Fisher/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Kaguya-chan (talk) 14:51, 26 July 2010 (UTC)

GA review (see here for criteria)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS):

   Lead is on the short side; Also "....pays homage to the lifestyle of the upper class British gentleman of leisure" is a little confusing. Did you mean something like "....pays homage to the leisurely lifestyle of the upper class British gentleman"?

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

   Would like a source for Adaptions

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

   Character section is very short and would probably work better being removed and cited in the caption.

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

   File:Jeremy Fisher Deluxe Binding 1906.jpg seems odd since there is already a cover picture

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

• Expanded lead, and adjusted sentence about "British gentleman". Provided source for adaptation. Deleted character section and incorporated info into image caption. Deleted image of deluxe binding. Susanne2009NYC (talk) 19:55, 26 July 2010 (UTC)

Thank you for all your hard work. It fulfills the GA criteria. Kaguya-chan (talk) 22:07, 26 July 2010 (UTC)