Talk:The Servant of Two Masters

Latest comment: 16 years ago by Dcd139 in topic Unencyclopedic

Unencyclopedic

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I'm tagging the page as unencyclopedic. We have two synopses for some reason, and neither feels like a neutral synopsis, but rather a review or nonneutral summary. I'm fixing some of the worst ones, and if I have time I'll try to improve the page generally. dcd139 (talk) 04:51, 7 March 2008 (UTC)Reply

  • I went through and removed or altered anything in the first synopsis that seemed written in non-encyclopedic style. I looked at the second synopsis and decided it was a) superfluous and b) irredeemable, so it's been deleted. Other improvements/suggestions would be highly appreciated. dcd139 (talk) 05:09, 7 March 2008 (UTC)Reply

'Themes' section is unsourced. Orignal research?

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This unsourced 'Themes' section looks like original research or personal reflection. Unless good sources are provided, it should probably be deleted. Thanks.