Talk:The Series Finale/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 14:52, 29 August 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:52, 29 August 2021 (UTC)

• Remove the comma after "Wanda Maximoff's chaos magic".
• Add a serial comma after "re-assembled" (American English).
• Also remove the comma after "Maximoff's magic".
• "survived development of the episode" – reword
• Add hyphens between "fine tune" and "self acceptance".
• "before beung changed" – typo
• "labelling" → "labeling" (American English)
• "eratic-looking" – typo
• Add a comma after "In some instances".
• "this episodes" – typo
• "given freedom" → "given the freedom"
• WP:RECEPTION: More reviews, less quotes.
• "CHris Gridley" – typo
• Be consistent with The Art of VFX and Art of VFX.
• Mark references from Vanity Fair with "|url-access=limited".
  • @Some Dude From North Carolina: Did you mean to pass this one yet? No one has addressed the issues you brought up. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 01:42, 15 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Please ignore that last comment. I don't know where my brain is at. I thought these comments were new for the 14th, not from the 11th, and Adamstom.97 addressed your comments. Apologies and thanks for reviewing all the WandaVision nominations! - Favre1fan93 (talk) 02:49, 15 September 2021 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed