Talk:The Pinball of the Dead/GA1

Latest comment: 7 years ago by MPJ-DK in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: MPJ-DK (talk · contribs) 04:30, 1 January 2017 (UTC)Reply

I will be picking up the review of this article.  MPJ-DK  04:30, 1 January 2017 (UTC)Reply

External links
  • The tool checks out okay on all external links so that's in order  Y
Copyright violation tool
  • Seem to be okay, it hit on quotes etc. but nothing to worry about  Y
General review
  • I don't like seeing GAs with just one lead paragraph, I think we should always strive towards the best possible lead and this just feels short
  • Related - honestly the article seems short too, I read through it and then sat there and was like "is that it"? The reception part is longer than the Gameplay and Development section combined, that imbalance is problematic for me, makes it more about what people thought of the game than the actual game itself.
  • The quote by Kasavin needs a direct source listed with it
  • Images
  • The two non-free images looks to have appropriate tags and explanations, there really are no "free" versions available and the free image of the Gameboy is appropriate too - No issues.  MPJ-DK  23:14, 7 January 2017 (UTC)Reply
  • General review